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Exhale-d



I Exhaled.

And this is what it came to.
^WiseGuy^
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  1. Sunny29 August 2009 at 21:05

    I said it there, but I'll say it here, too. I love your submission, it was very touching. Thank you for your words!

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  2. one-hit_wonder29 August 2009 at 22:30

    Congratulations on your publication - it's very touching and heartfelt.

    xxx

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  3. Kristin30 August 2009 at 09:19

    Oh wow. What a gorgeous poem.

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  4. AnotherDreamer30 August 2009 at 11:09

    Beautiful.

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  5. S30 August 2009 at 14:26

    Beautiful, sad yet strong poem. Well done and congrats :)

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  6. becomingwhole31 August 2009 at 04:12

    as I told you over there--brilliant and beautiful. We are the richer.

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  7. Clare31 August 2009 at 04:45

    powerful poem. I read it and felt sad and strong for you both at the same time.

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  8. eyeheartinternet31 August 2009 at 13:01

    I love it. Beautiful.

    Congratulations!

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  9. IF Optimist, then...1 September 2009 at 13:06

    Wonderful, spiritual, true, profound.

    Thank you for that, for your support, for your extraordinary Wiseguy self.

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